My poetry :3

Here is some poetry I've made

Watchful Eye

I live these few moments in agony
Wondering if someone will ever find me
Just laying here on the cold ground
Not able to make a single sound

My body wounded from the impact of the fall
I can't even get up and crawl
Falling out of a five story window
Not knowing what I would hit below

I hear footsteps not too far away
But I can't scream to ask them to come this way
My throat is full of blood
It feels like it's thick like mud

I hear your voice coming near
It's filled with extreme fear
Now up in your arms
Even now I fall for your charms

I see tears in your eyes
I can feel that you can see my demise
I clear my throat to speak
You come near for my voice is very weak

I said I'd love you til the day I die
But please don't cry
I'll always be here
Even though I won't be near

Forever in my heart you shall stay
I will never really go away
You are my life
You hid me from the worlds strife

I love you with all my heart
And we will never really be apart
Farwell my love
I'll always watch you from above..

*sniff* *sniff* i think im going to cry

Oh please xD I have a sadder one.

uh oh

It's about child abuse o-o

AHHHHHHHHHHH THE WORST THING IN THE UNIVERSE

I agree o3o; lookie I'll post it. I wrote this in 7th grade so.. yeah D; I'm currently going in 12th :/

My name is Lilly, I am but three
I live with mommy and daddy

Daddy leaves early in the morning
When mommy is still snoring

When she wakes up she looks and yells at me
Throwing her bottle of whiskey

After this I try to find some food in the house
There isn't even enough here too feed a mouse

Mommy blames me for being sick
And she usually hits me with a stick

It dosn't really hurt anymore
I just wish things would be how they were before

Mommy was so nice and loving
Now she just resorts to drinking

Daddy comes home late
Yet mommy still gives him all her fate

He smells like cheap perfume
I know he's been in a hotel room

When daddy comes in
they both come at me with a big grin

Hitting my left arm and leg
They keep going until I start to beg

They leave me alone for a little while
As they leave with a big smile

Daddy leaves for the night again
He says he'll be out with a friend

I lay in my room and as quiet as can be
I don't want mommy to come back at me

But shh I just heard daddy's car
He must be back from Charlie's bar

I hear him yell outside
Then I try to hide

As he opens the front door
I hear his footsepts on the hardwood floor

He opens up my door pushing whats in the way
Peeks in his head and says "It's time to play"

I'm terrified and shaking
On please Lord why is this happening?

He tells me to come out
But I can't move, I just want to scream and shout

He says he'll count to three
Then he finally spotted me

I start to cry
Then he takes a big sigh

He reaches down
and starts to frown

"My little girl" he says
"You're suppose to do what daddy says"

He picked me up by my throat
as I started gripping at his coat

I start to cry and beg him to stop
He just threw me down with a flop

He picked me up again
And said "Just tell me when"

He threw me once more down on my head
I couldn't move; he thought I was dead

He walked away
And waited for a new day

After he left I sat up in fear
Because I knew my time was near

I layed down again on my back
closing my eyes until everything went black

My name is Lilly, I am but three
And tonight my daddy murdered me.

Lol too depressing for me

Shush you Justin xD what do you know? I have pretty ones too. But they're all lovey dovey xD

Lol i get 98 in english because you can't get 100 so ya...that's what i know

bullpoopie o-o my friend got 100 in AP bio, chem and phys. then 95 in AP English.

well they only give 100 if you over achieve and if i try for 100 i won't have that much free time

The end isn't depressing.. I think. xD

Undecided.

I realize now, that I'm alone
My thoughts have all been turned to stone
Those who I thought I could trust
Have now been taken over by lust

Telling me everything was how it's been
You keep lying to me, what a sin
You'll someday see the price
And you won't like the sacrifice

You lied and you cheated
I can't believe you havn't been deleted
How can you even stand yourself?
Now you're nothing more then a book on my shelf

I hope you get caught in the act
I hope you get crushed from the impact
Knowing that the one you've been cheating on
Will forever be gone

I know I'm mean and cruel
But it's because you've been the fool
You're such a horrible liar to me
And now I can fully see we will never be

I hate your guts
You drive me nuts
Why is it everytime I think about you
I can't deny that I love you..

ummm i don't know how to respond to this

awww is all that i can say

What is it really -that- bad? .-.

No it's too personal so i can't criticize

Most of the time I just write things that come to mind. In other poems I have, I usually just describe things I remember seeing, somewhat like a deja-vu or scenes of a dream. So usually it isn't anything of my personal life. o.o but gotta scan my cop, it's acting up again. bbl.

Ok so it isn't real. Then i can criticize. It still is depressing. It's depressing because the person that wrote it is still in pain and is sad because of broken love

Well o.o you got the jist of it.

still depressing then lol

Better? xD


Shining

The stars shine bright in my face
Trying to hold in their embrace
Hoping this feeling will stay for a little while
Because finally, I've found something that makes me smile

I keep holding on to this feeling, wanting it to stay
I never do want it to go away
Because this is all I have left of your memory
Thats why I want to keep it close to me

As I open my eyes I can barely see
I just know I want you here beside me
I want to be in your arms
I want to be victim of your charms

I miss your smile
I want to see it again for a litte while
I just want to hold you close
And just hope that how much I love you shows.


I close my eyes
And then I realize
That you were always there beside me
I was just too blind that I couldnt' see

The stars shine down on my face
Just staying there in your embrace
I look in your eyes and tell you "I love you"
I just hope you know.. this feeling is true..

lol you don't have to please me it's for you to show off you're poems

You keep putting me down, you bully D:

ok mouth is shut after this one unless it's something good